we eventually made all the amendments to our story board, and went with Carls drawings. The reasons for this are because we know we are going to use flash, and Carls drawings are better suited and will be faster to animate when we get to that stage in the development. 

here is the animatic that we have done for our week 1 deadline. 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Tr0LmG0YBI